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[学习类【雅思 NAATI PTE PY 辅导】] 【Nicole老师原创】雅思写作遭遇的难度话题分析(Part1/2)

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曼拓教育 发表于 2017-1-16 11:44:47
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【Nicole老师原创】雅思写作遭遇的难度话题分析(Part1/2)



Nicole老师:
雅思作文考题在近几年涌现了大量的难题。难题的难,体现在很难满足Task Response(找不到恰当合理的观点)或对题目理解有误,也体现在相关词汇的缺乏。在这里,总结一些雅思作文的难题,并且给各位考生提供一些观点以供参考,希望可以开拓各位考生的想法。准备考试的朋友们,也不妨自己试着想想观点,列一列提纲,更好的情况下把作文写出来。

Some people think that universities should provide knowledge and skills related to future career. Others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion?
题目中用红色部分标注出来的为关键字,在这两方观点中,不难看出第一个观点比较好写,而且题目中的要求非常明确 knowledge and skills,也就是意味着两个 supporting ideas 分别针对知识和技能就可以啦。这里为大家提供几个topic sentences

1.      One compelling reason for this is that all the contemporary occupations nowadays are task specific, which makes it a necessity for workers to be able to comply with every job requirement.

2.      It is also beyond doubt that most jobs would require employees to do a lot of multi-tasking and to be capable of meeting deadlines while conducting project work.

3.      If graduates are equipped with desired knowledge and skills, they are more likely to be successfully employed owing to the fact that they can handle most of their jobs well as compared to those who lack certain knowledge in the work field.

从这几个核心句中很容易看出大学教授与工作紧密相关的知识和技能会直接让学生成为受益方,他们会有更大的机会被雇佣,与此同时在工作岗位更快适应工作环境展现更好的工作表现。

相反地,另一个角度就比较找观点而且要从access knowledge的角度出发,仍然在这里给大家提供几个topic sentences

1. There is also a case for advocating that the main task of universities is to provide their students an access to a vast amount of learning materials and other resources for their own learning and analyzing.

2. Universities should focus on teaching each subject covering a wide spectrum of knowledge and let students choose the specific discipline of interest to them.

从这个角度出发我们的观点可以强调大学的作用在于把知识提供给学生而不是提前过滤好,因为只有学习知识的人才有权利选择什么对他们来说是重要的和感兴趣的。

Nicole老师:最后,在这里提醒各位考生,这里提供的只是一些想法而已,为的只是帮助大家开拓思路,仅供借鉴。



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